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Old 01-09-2009, 06:58 AM
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Hey everyone...

I just created this template and wanted some reviews from the experts

This is one of my first templates and I have made it 100% from scratch.

Here it is:

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Old 01-09-2009, 07:04 AM
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Not bad at all, I must say

I think you should work a little more on the footer. May be change its color and also pay more attention to the background color and font color you are using on it. On footer you have dark background but against that dark background you did not use bright font colors that's why the text is hard to read.

Fill out the top white space too

Good job.
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Old 01-09-2009, 07:12 AM
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Thanks for your review... Yea, I will change the footer text.

I am not really sure what i should do with the white space atm, but I am thinking about putting a flash banner there... I might also add a slideshow effect...
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Old 01-09-2009, 07:31 AM
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Nice design

Since it is a web hosting design so you can use some server, datacenter or that kind of images to put in that white area?
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Old 01-09-2009, 09:13 AM
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Ok, Here is the newest version...



What do you think ?
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Old 01-09-2009, 10:38 AM
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Do you think that I should increase the width of the site ?
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Old 01-09-2009, 10:41 AM
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Looking much better now

About the width I think its OK.
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Old 11-09-2009, 05:26 AM
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Your template looking good to me. I am no designer but I can see you are working hard on it
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i like your design, Its good.
Don't go for flash header, use javascript or jquery and make a slider or a changing images to highlight your products.
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To be honest..... ............ I REALLY LIKE IT!!! So cool both
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I really like the silver bar on the top right corner Where it says Blog Live Support etc.

Overall nice job!

Now I gotta learn how to design .. :P
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It seems to me you might want to reconsider how MightHost.com is rendered in the header (you could try some other graphic ideas). In rest all I can say is congratulations. The overall look is very professional.
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It's great! The only thing I would recommend you to do is to spend more time on the logo to make it really stand out... first impressions count and it's the first thing I see when the design loads on my screen. Maybe something with a white outline would look better. But I'm sure this would sell, coming from a person who spends all her money buying themes, websites and domains
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Old 25-09-2009, 01:34 PM
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Thanks for all the comments

Here is the coded/live version :O
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Cool one of my first design

My first design as graphics is not as very pro. as my teacher's do but it's a good for a new kid in the block as a designer.thanks for sharing this.

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Old 27-11-2009, 07:04 PM
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Nice design. Where will it be released for download?
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Maybe you should have a dofollow link to your website where you have designed by webvader?
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